IELTS Mock Test 9 Band Score IELTS Essays Task 2

Jul 17, 2026

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A writing-focused practice booklet for IELTS Writing Task 2, designed to help test takers strengthen argumentative essay skills through high-level model answers. It presents multiple band 9 sample essays addressing common prompts, such as CCTV surveillance and its effects on security versus privacy, permissive parenting and long-term consequences for self-control and social responsibility, and homework in education by weighing opposing views. Each essay demonstrates clear thesis statements, structured body arguments, relevant examples, and formal conclusions with accurate task response and coherence.

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Simon Corcoran is an ex-IELTS examiner and a native speaker of English. He runs IELTS preparation courses in Manchester, UK. The purpose of this booklet is to help test takers to improve their writing skills from IELTS Writing Task-2 questions. SAMPLE ESSAYS TASK 2 [www.ielts-simon.com](www.ielts-simon.com) Prepared by Asror Toshev [www.ielts-simon.com](www.ielts-simon.com) Compiled and organized by Toshev “CCTV” essay In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom. Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks? It is true that video surveillance has become commonplace in many cities in recent years. While I understand that critics may see this as an invasion of privacy, I believe that the benefits do outweigh the drawbacks. There are two main reasons why people might disapprove of the use of video cameras in public places. The first objection is that these cameras invade our privacy, in the sense that we are constantly being watched by the authorities or by private security firms. Many people find this intrusive and feel that the recording of their movements is a form of state control that curtails their individual freedom. The second argument against the proliferation of CCTV cameras is that they are being used as an alternative to police officers patrolling the streets. If this is indeed happening, then it is unlikely that members of the public will feel safer. In spite of the drawbacks mentioned above, I believe that the use of video cameras to monitor public areas is a positive measure. The key objective of video surveillance is to deter criminals and to prevent crime. For example, petty criminals like shoplifters and pickpockets are less likely to operate in parts of cities where they know that they are being watched. At the same time, when crimes are committed, the police can use video evidence to catch and prosecute offenders. Therefore, in my view, video cameras offer valuable support to police officers, and they make cities safer for inhabitants, workers and visitors alike. In conclusion, it seems to me that we gain more than we lose from the enhanced security that CCTV cameras bring to our cities. (275 words, band 9) “Permissive parenting” essay Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have forchildren as they get older? It is true that some parents are overly permissive and tend to spoil their children. In my opinion, this isnot a good parenting style, and it can have a range of negative long-term consequences. If parents want to raise respectful and well-behaved children, I believe that a certain amount of discipline is necessary. Having worked with children myself, I have learnt that clear expectations and

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