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Use the three categories of feedback within this worksheet to evaluate and polish your essay. Check off each box as you review the corresponding piece of advice, and take note of what you could improve in your own essay to incorporate that advice. Tip: You can type directly into this document and then download it to save your work!  \nContent  \n\n| Make sure your essay includes these key elements that make for a compelling story. |  |\n| --- | --- |\n| | Find a common thread: Focus on an idea, topic, or theme to carry consistently throughout your essay. |\n| | Include unique points: Include parts of your circumstances that make your story uniquely your own. |\n| | Focus on yourself: Make sure to tell your own story and motivations, not the story of something or someone else. |\n| | Incorporate descriptive detail: Add concrete and/or interesting details to bring your story to life for your reader. |\n| | Use a positive lens: When including challenges or negative circumstances, focus on how you overcame the challenges, what you learned, and how you grew. |\n| Edits to make in my essay: |  |\n|  |  |\n\nTip: Remember to save this PDF after finishing your work!  \nRevising Your Essay Worksheet  \nStructure  \n\n| Strong essays flow well and follow a theme. You can improve structure by incorporating these tips. |  |\n| --- | --- |\n| | Use paragraph breaks: Break your essay into multiple paragraphs to segment ideas and make reading easier. |\n| | Include transitions: Include sentences or phrases at the beginning of new paragraphsand ideas to tie your thoughts together and ease your essay from one topic to another. |\n| | Avoid tangents: Keep ideas relevant to the theme and to the point. Try to focus on 1-2 key ideas with a few supporting examples. |\n| | Bring your essay full-circle: Wrap up toward the end to connect ideas touched upon throughout your essay all together. |\n\n\n| Edits to make in my essay: |\n| --- |\n|  |\n\nTip: Remember to save this PDF after finishing your work!  \nRevising Your Essay Worksheet  \nMechanics  \n\n| A large part of presenting your best essay comes down to small technical pieces. 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