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Wolf, Ph. D. Director of Undergraduate Research  \n201 Cater Hall Auburn, AL 36849 Phone: 334-844-5772 [undgres@auburn.edu](undgres@auburn.edu)  \nPersonal Statement Example \\#1  \nThis personal statement was written by an Auburn student applying for the prestigious Rhodes Scholarship. Names have been removed for privacy.  \nYoung, fragile Sweya stared with an intensity that struck my core. I held her on my lap as I taught her how to administer eye drops to protect her good eye. Her left eye was blinded by trauma that occurred before eye doctors were available at her refugee camp in Ghana. After a full examination by the Unite for Sight doctors, it was concluded that Sweya’s injury was permanent. I did not want to let Sweya go. While she had accepted the conclusion, for a moment I still struggled with a feeling of anguish. Modern medicine had failed Sweya. The reality of the moment returned and I let her go. She quickly disappeared into the milieu of the camp, but she will never disappear from my memory.  \nFailure is no stranger to the practice of medicine. If an architect builds a bridge and that bridge collapses, it is relatively easy to determine the cause. It was designed by humans. If a patient is in poor health, however, the cause is not as easy to discern. The reason lies in Aristotle’s description of the practice of medicine as a “stochastic” art. A stochastic art is compatible with failure because, unlike architecture, the part or structure in question was not built by the party charged with finding a cause or remedy. Doctors have the task of fixing things that are not of their own making and are unknown concretely. Research is the most effective tool to break these barriers; we recognize our shortcomings and in the spirit of human ingenuity, inquire into and innovate.  \nAs a prospective physician, I propose to pursue my MSC by Research in Ophthalmology at Oxford University. I wish to attend Oxford because it presents an opportunity to participate in cutting-edge learning; arguably, it would expose me to the best collection of scholars in the world, and a studentbody and cross-cultural environment unmatched by any institution.  \nAlthough I am accustomed to the excitement of competing gymnastics in front of thousands of fans, I am stoic and contemplative. My mind loves to quietly wander, study, and find solutions. I have indulged my desire to learn and question my surrounding by involvement in research. I have conducted research directed by Professor Michael Squillacote on the photochemistry of the visual system. Research in ophthalmology at Oxford will help me expand upon my knowledge of vision atthe photochemical level to a more holistic view.  \nThe diverse student body and Oxford University also provides an opportunity for cultural immersion. Last summer, I studied Spanish abroad in Spain and volunteered for the nonprofit organization Unite for Sight in Accra, Ghana. My incredible experiences traveling to these countries have taught me how to adapt quickly and have inspired me to step out into the world. Oxford presents the opportunity to be active in research and high level learning while experiencing a new culture. This opportunity is unique, much like my life as a collegiate gymnast.  \nAt a very young age, I fell in love with flipping and decided I wanted to be a great gymnast. At age 12, I trained 32 hours per week. At 14, I was partially home-schooled and I qualified Elite—the highest level of gymnastics. Soon thereafter, I smashed my face into the vaulting apparatus, broke my nose, and required 14 stitches to close the gash on my forehead. I developed fears and struggled to regain the passion I had as a youth. I fell and failed repeatedly, but I did not give up. I recovered my passion and qualified for the Junior Olympic National Team. I then accepted a full-athletic scholarship to Auburn University. 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