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Your application package is very focused and clear. Here are some comments regarding it that I hope you find useful:  \nJob Details  \nFrom the title of the document: International Volunteer Destination Preference Form, it seems that the position you are applying for is a volunteer position, where the applicant will be able to choose a destination where they will volunteer as either a Dentist, a Hygienist, a Dental Assistant, or a Paramedic.  \n• Background Information  \nThe application form gives only a small amount of detail regarding the actual position. Important details such as the company name, and what the volunteer will actually be doing and where when they are hired seems to be missing. If there is amore general job description page, it would be good to have a link to it so that the reader can better understand why someone would want to apply to the job.  \nCover Letter  \n• Initial Impression  \nYour work history and your strengths are well covered. It’s like to have some more detail regarding your history, such as your work at free clinics, which is definitely an asset. It seems that your interests and the interests ofthe organization Kindness In Action are aligned perfectly. I would suggest emphasizing this aspect of your character and your previous work even more. Perhaps say something about what you believe Kindess In Action’s goals and beliefs are, and what your own are, and how they are aligned. That should be easy because it is obvious from your work history and interests that you do believe in helping people.  \n• Format  \nOne thing that stood out to me regarding your application package is the nice formatting it has, especially with the signature at the bottom. It’s hard to tell if that is your actual signature that you were able to add to the document, but even if it isn’t, it looks very nice.  \n• Background  \nThere is a small amount of history on your move to Canada, and your previous work as a Dentist in India, those were very interesting facts, and it adds to your application since you come from a more unique background. Since the cover letter should be short, perhaps there isn’t more room to expand on your personal history relative to working in a different country, but I found the information interesting on a personal level.  \n• Work History  \nThere are three paragraphs worth of detail on your work history, which is conveyed very professionally. Maybe one thing you can add would be some detail on what you do at the general practice you work at part time.  \nResume  \n• Formatting  \nThe formatting for your resume is clean and very easy to read. The ordering of your resume: Objective, Work Experience, Education, Volunteer Work, Interests, References, is very appropriate and ordered to their importance.  \n• Work Experience  \nThe work experience you have and the details you added for each job is very good. It’s easy to see what jobs you had held previously and what they entailed. It’s nice that you put the dates on the left side of the page; it makes it much easier to read than when they are on the right side. I might adopt this formatting for my own resume.  \n• Education  \nThe formatting of your education history is very clean as well, just like your work experience. It is curious that you are pursuing a Dental Hygiene Degree after already receiving a Dental Hygiene Diploma. These are probably very different things that I don’t have the background to understand.  \n• Volunteer Work  \nIt would be good to add more details to what your specific responsibilities are for each of these volunteer roles, perhaps who your clientele were. It would be good to hear if you helped out kids or the disadvantaged.  \nReference Letters  \n• Tone and Format  \nThe tone of your refer","cbCaidIYDhmGB0Z1","https://ap.wps.com/l/cbCaidIYDhmGB0Z1","pdf",44531,"English","# Job Details\n## Background Information\n# Cover Letter\n## Initial Impression\n## Format\n## Background\n## Work History\n# Resume\n## Formatting\n## Work Experience\n## Education\n## Volunteer Work\n# Reference Letters\n## Tone and Format\n## Content\n# Final Thoughts","[{\"question\":\"What job details are missing in the volunteer application form?\",\"answer\":\"The reviewer notes that the form provides limited information about the position, missing key details such as the company name and what the volunteer will do and where/when. 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