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As I approached and navigated the chaos of the college admissions process, my whole world was fractured. Between drafts and drafts of varying personal statements, everyone around me seemed to know that the gaping grief-sized hole in my life was what colleges were looking for. I was expected to capitalize on this.  \nThe concept of students centering their college essays on their personal trauma has been dubbed “trauma dumping.” Viral social media stories have popularized this essaywriting approach, where trauma essays are portrayed as the “make-or-break” factor in college applications.  \nWhen students compare themselves to the other applicants, they rank themselves against their peers in a form of trauma Olympics. Turning one’s pain into a self-sales pitch should never be the way to win over an admissions officer. The personal essay could be meaningful for students if they actually felt that any topic was available to them—as I reflect on my own college application process, however, I’m left wondering, is capitalizing on and benefiting from personal trauma unethical? Or is it a“glass-half-full” way of looking at things?  \nFounder and CEO of the Krupnick Approach and current college consultant Dr. Joseph Krupnick ’00 said , “The fundamental goal for getting into top schools is to differentiate yourself, to distinguish yourself, and to create your own hook … People who have traumatic experiences or who have an uncharacteristic life, or other experiences, that are also unusual, feel pressure to write about those things, because they are very personal and unusual.”  \nThe majority of college applications consist of test scores, GPAs, and class rankings—all factors that shrink our beings into data points. It’s no surprise that essays are often viewed as the only thing on a student’s application over which they feel they have control.  \nAccording to the College Board , colleges want “a unique perspective , strong writing, and an authentic voice ,” from students in their application essay. Harvard Business Review says the Common App essay is “your chance to show schools who you are , what makes you tick, and why you stand out from the crowd.”  \nThe college application process is “intrinsically an intrusive process,” according to Krupnick. “And it’s intrinsically a process in which you’re telling people things that they have no right to know about. It’s kind of how the system seems to work now,” he explained.  \nThe college essay should be a space for exploration and reflection where students can present what they care about and what makes them who they are. Yet , when students feel required to write about their adversity to stand out , the college essay allows for minimal amounts of meaningful self-reflection. This phenomenon narrows what applicants think is worth writing about , and more problematically, what makes them worth receiving the education they dream of.  \nWhen a Harvard junior who wished to remain anonymous was asked if they felt a pressure to write about their eating disorder, they said , “I felt like I was able to write about it , from not a place of it being a sad story, but of actually about something pretty incredible that I was able to overcome.” They continued to explain that our society normalizes trauma in a problematic way, detailing that “people to try to compete with others” about their trauma.  \nSimilarly, Abigail Mack ’25 went viral on TikTok after posting about her “Letter-S” essay about the loss of a parent. Stories like Mack’s contribute to the belief that in order to bea competitive college applicant , not only must students have endured trauma—they also must put it on display to be analyzed by admissions officers. ","cbCaigtFJpduQPji","https://ap.wps.com/l/cbCaigtFJpduQPji","pdf",119380,"English","# I am More than My Sob Story\n## Pressure to center trauma in admissions\n## What colleges say they value\n## Reflection versus exploitation of adversity","[{\"question\":\"What is “trauma dumping” and why does the piece criticize it?\",\"answer\":\"“Trauma dumping” refers to structuring college essays around personal trauma as a competitive selling point. 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