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Yale University by Bluebelle C.  \nGeorgia Institute of Technology by Alfonso A.  \nHarvard, Yale, Princeton, Stanford, Columbia, UPenn by Jamie B. Vanderbilt University by Grace P.  \nDuke University by Alanna M.  \nUniversity of Pennsylvania by Anika P.  \nUniversity of Pennsylvania by Talia S.  \nDuke, Tufts, and Case Western University by Timothy G.  \nUniversity of Southern California by Qaqambile M.  \nUCLA and the University of North Carolina, Chapel Hill by Matthew P. Columbia University by Cenon C.  \nUniversity of Southern California, NYU, UC Berkeley by Shreya T. Georgia Institute of Technology by Dennis Z.  \np.06  \np.08  \np.09  \np.10  \np.11  \np.12  \np.13  \np.14  \np.15  \np.16  \np.17  \np.18  \np.20  \np.22  \nWhat you need to know about the Personal Essay  \nIn college applications, the personal statement holds a unique degree of importance. Top essays will offer a window into the student’s character and personality-offering admissions officers a view of the student they may eventually admit. The statement brings to life the grades and accomplishments that color the rest of t he application.  \nBy bringing together some of our best students' essays, from different places and backgrounds, we want to provide both inspiration and a template for future students seeking to provide colleges a powerful statement about who they are. At Crimson, we are constantly amazed by the essays we read every year, the thoughtfulness of our students, and the power of their words.  \nTo give full context to these essays-how they will be read, and why they matter-here are a couple guiding questions we think about with each of our students.  \n01. Why is the personal statement so important?  \nThe personal statement is a reflection of broader application priorities. Top colleges and universities seek well-rounded students that will thrive in academic environments emphasizing plurality of thought and will bring different perspectives. This essay isabout helping colleges understand who the student is-their formative experiences, their goals, and how they think about the world around them. More than any other part of the process, it is a window into their mind and thoughtfulness; empathy, and reflection, are prized highly.  \nThe best Common App essays focus on insight and takeaways from an experience-rather than the experience itself. The essays are often humble and reflect a student's capacity to struggle with, and conquer, difficult concepts ( rather than implying that the student is an expert or has nothing more to learn) . By the personal statement, universities can identify who this person really is as an individual, and if they are the right fit for the institution and represents what they are looking for.  \n02. What kind of personal statement stands out toadmissions officers?  \nA great personal statement has very little to do with the rest of t he student’s application. It should not reiterate other parts of the Common App. Unless there is a ton of additional context needed on an existing activity, students should shy away from touching on topics covered elsewhere and focus instead on explaining other parts of who they are. Statements should be authentic and reflective: what happened to the student is often less important than how they processed and understood it. Students can write about any topic they wantpersonal stories from their youth, how they think about important social issues, or their dreams and ambitions. The essays below reflect this, what unifies them is neither topic nor style but how honest they are and the picture the reader gets into the writer’s mind and personality.  \n03. 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