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The vast majority of applicants begin with a heartfelt personal anecdote. From this anecdote they draw a lesson—usually, a moral so familiar and so general as to amount to a cliché : it’s important to listen to others; I have persevered despite hardships; some groups are unfairly oppressed; it’s good to learn from lived experience rather than just from books; everyone is equal; the past influences the present; I now recognize that experience is universal. The rest ofthe essay then describes a sequence of experiences: academics, sports, community or public service. And the applicants typically suffuse their essays with idealistic feeling, promising to change the world.  \nAt the moment, that’s the Marshall formula: anecdote, cliché, list of activities, idealism. I want to suggest that it’s not a great formula. It’s not even a winning formula. Many applicants may have used it, but that doesn’t mean that it has won them scholarships. If you write this way, you have to be so extraordinary that you stand out among a vast number of qualified applicants. But if you write in a more specific, intriguing, compelling way, you ’ll command the committee’s attention and interest with your essay alone.  \nSo: how to go about writing a different kind of essay? Here are a few principles to guide you as you set about the task.  \n1) Say something new.  \nConsider it your single most important job to say something the committee does not already know about the world. Show them how endurance running is like neuroscience, or argue that most human rights arguments get it wrong, or suggest that the biology lab is a kind of theater. That is, invite the members of the selection committee to entertain a thought that has never occurred to them before. Clichés are boring, and worse, they’re often unpersuasive, so please: stay away from them at all costs. But be warned: this isn’t easy!  \n2) Start in an exciting way.  \nAlmost all good writing begins with a hook to grab the reader’s attention. You don’t need to be cutesy or dramatic, but think about beginning with some kind of surprise, a mystery or an intriguing possibility. You might start the essay with a question, or an unexpected connection between two things, or a paradox. You can start with an intriguing anecdote, of course, but that’s not the only way to begin.  \nLook at a few examples of writing you particularly like to see how good writers start off, and see if you can borrow some of their strategies.  \n3) Weave the essay together.  \nThis is one of the hardest parts of writing a great essay, but it’s one of the most important keys to giving your writing clarity and appeal. Try to connect different pieces of your experience together: how has your community service enriched your academic life, or vice versa? Is there a particular resonance between elements of your life—your family and your research, for example—that you can draw through the whole essay? Your challenge here is to find something intriguing or surprising that knits everything together. As always, it’s crucial to stay away from clichés, so you don’t want to connect your athletics to your family by asserting that both have required you to face challenges—that will be too obvious. But if you can show that your passion for particular artists matters to your future career in health care policy because those artists have explored the excruciating boundaries of experience—daring to go where other artists have not into the ugliness and intolerability of pain—then you will have something fascinating to give your readers.  \n4) Point to differences rather than similarities  \nI have suggested that you weave your experiences together, but surprisingly, one of the best ways to do this is by pointing to the differences between experiences rather than","cbCaiqyWEWTY2YRL","https://ap.wps.com/l/cbCaiqyWEWTY2YRL","pdf",38024,"English","# Principles for a Different Marshall Essay\n## Say Something New\n## Start in an Exciting Way\n## Weave the Essay Together\n## Point to Differences Rather Than Similarities\n## Don’t Play It Safe\n## Leave Things Out","[{\"question\":\"What is the common formula for Marshall personal statements, and why does the text criticize it?\",\"answer\":\"Most statements follow a familiar pattern: a heartfelt anecdote, a cliché lesson, a list of activities, and idealistic promises. 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