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Read these sentences.  \n\n| (1)Flyby missions near Jupiter have been happening since 1973.  \u003Cbr>(2)Flyby missions allow scientists to collect data about Jupiter and its moons.   |\n| --- |\n\nWhat is the best way to combine the sentences to clarify the relationship between the ideas?  \nA.While flyby missions near Jupiter have been happening since 1973,scientists collect dataabout the planet and its moons.  \nB.Although there have been flyby missions near Jupiter since 1973,they have allowedscientists to collect data about the planet and its moons.  \nC.Flyby missions near Jupiter,which allow scientists to collect data about the planet and itsmoons,have been happening since 1973.  \nD.Flyby missions have been happening near Jupiter,but scientists have been collecting dataabout the planet and its moons since 1973.  \n## 2.  Which sentence contains an error in its construction and should be revised?\n\n\n| (1)In 1976,the National Basketball Association(NBA)absorbed several teams of the  \u003Cbr>American Basketball Association(ABA),including the New York Nets,who played in the Long  \u003Cbr>Island area at the time.(2)The owner of the Nets decided to take the team to New Jersey  \u003Cbr>after the team had financial troubles,where the team played for thirty-five seasons.(3)The  \u003Cbr>New Jersey Nets had sixteen playoff appearances,including two appearances in the NBA  \u003Cbr>finals.(4)In 2012,the team changed ownership and returned to New York,where the team  \u003Cbr>now plays under the name the Brooklyn Nets.   |\n| --- |\n\nE.sentence 1  \nF.sentence 2  \nG.sentence 3  \nH.sentence 4  \n## 3.How should the paragraph be revised?\n\n\n| (1)Danielle spent several hours preparing for an upcoming audition for a play at the  \u003Cbr>community theater.(2)First she did vocal exercises to practice her diction and projection so  \u003Cbr>that her words would carry clearly throughout the large auditorium.(3)Then she studies the  \u003Cbr>text of the monologue to better understand the emotions,and motivations of the character  \u003Cbr>she plans to portray.(4)Finally she recited her monologue in front of a mirror many times,  \u003Cbr>making slight adjustments and improvements to her performance each time.   |\n| --- |\n\nA.Sentence 1:Change spent to had spent,AND insert a comma after play.  \nB.Sentence 2:Change did to does,AND insert a comma after projection.  \nC.Sentence 3:Change studies to studied,AND delete the comma after emotions.  \nD.Sentence 4:Change recited to recites,AND delete the comma after times.  \n## 4.Which pair of revisions needs to be made in this paragraph?\n\n\n| (1)Both Italian gelato and American ice cream are delightful treats to have on a hot summer  \u003Cbr>day,but many people wonder:what is the difference between the two?(2)To start with,the  \u003Cbr>butterfat content is much higher in ice cream than it is in gelato,making the Italian treat a  \u003Cbr>wiser decision for people looking to make healthier choices.(3)Additionally,the mixing  \u003Cbr>process,which adds less air to the frozen treat,makes gelato denser than ice cream.  \u003Cbr>(4)Finally,gelato is served 10 to 15 degrees warmer than ice cream,which enhances the  \u003Cbr>texture and flavor of the gelato,and allow it to melt more quickly.   |\n| --- |\n\nE.Sentence 1:Delete the colon after wonder AND change is to are.  \nF.Sentence 2:Delete the comma after with AND change it is to they are.  \nG.Sentence 3:Delete the comma after process AND change makes to make.  \nH.Sentence 4:Delete the comma after gelato AND change allow to allows.  \nCONTINUE TO THE NEXT PAGE▶  \nREVISING/EDITING PART B  \n","cbCaiur8n2sAcJha","https://ap.wps.com/l/cbCaiur8n2sAcJha","pdf",3870361,54,"English","# REVISING/EDITING PART A\n## Directions\n## Question 1\n## Question 2\n## Question 3\n## Question 4\n# REVISING/EDITING PART B\n## Directions\n## Text: Martial Arts for the Mind and Body","[{\"question\":\"What is the focus of Part B in the provided material?\",\"answer\":\"Part B focuses on improving writing quality and correcting errors in a continuous text so it follows standard written English conventions, as shown by the martial arts passage about mental discipline and physical benefits.\"}]","REVISING/EDITING QUESTIONS 1-10 - PART A AND PART B | PDF",136]