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Commas are removed or kept depending on whether the elements form a series or whether phrases are essential for understanding.","Answer","https://schema.org",{"og:url":83,"og:type":117,"og:title":65,"og:site_name":95,"og:description":67},"article",{"robots":119,"canonical":83},"index,follow",{"doc_id":121,"site_id":62},274500,1789478125,{"code":4,"msg":5,"data":124},{"doc_id":121,"user_id":125,"nickname":92,"user_avatar":126,"doc_module":4,"category_id":19,"category_name":20,"doc_title":65,"doc_description":67,"doc_content":127,"file_id":128,"file_url":129,"file_type":130,"file_size":131,"view_count":105,"is_deleted":4,"is_public":8,"is_downloadable":8,"audit_status":8,"page_count":31,"language":132,"language_code":63,"site_id":62,"html_lang":63,"table_of_contents":133,"faqs":134,"seo_title":135,"seo_description":67,"update_tm":122,"read_time":136},1374391974468,"https://ap-avatar.wpscdn.com/davatar_29158cc5080c5b710cf443261637dec0","# REVISING/EDITING PART A\n\n1.The question asks for the best way to combine the sentences to clarify the relationship betweenthe ideas.  \nA.Incorrect.Even though the two ideas from the original sentences are incorporated into thecombined sentence,the use of the conjunction \"while\"in the first part of the sentencesuggests that there is a simultaneous but unrelated relationship between the two ideas,which is incorrect.  \nB.Incorrect.The combined sentence incorporates the ideas from both sentences,but theconjunction \"although\"suggests that scientists were allowed to collect data even thoughthere were flyby missions,which is an inaccurate way to express the relationship betweenthe ideas.  \nC.CORRECT.This sentence is the best way to combine the sentences because it accuratelyreflects the relationship between the ideas by using the nonrestrictive clause \"which allowscientists to collect data about the planet and its moons\"to describe the purpose of the flybymissions.(Nonrestrictive clauses are adjective clauses that give additional information abouta word or phrase.They sometimes begin with the relative pronoun \"which\"and are set off bycommas.)The idea that the missions \"have been happening since 1973\"follows thenonrestrictive clause.  \nD.Incorrect.The combined sentence uses the conjunction \"but\"to connect the ideas in the twooriginal sentences.This suggests an adverse relationship between ideas,which is aninaccurate way to connect the ideas expressed in the original sentences.  \n2.  The question asks for the identification of the sentence that has an error in its construction andshould be revised.  \nE.Incorrect.There are no errors in the structure of sentence 1.The clause \"who played in theLong Island area at the time\"correctly modifies the noun \"New York Nets.\"\"Who”is thecorrect relative pronoun to serve as the subject of the modifying clause because it refers topeople rather than objects or things.  \nF.CORRECT.Sentence 2 contains a structural error.The current placement of the clause\"where the Nets played for thirty-five seasons\"suggests the clause is modifying the term\"financial troubles,\"which is illogical.The clause \"where the Nets played for thirty-fiveseasons\"should immediately follow the location,\"New Jersey.\"A revised version of thesentence might read,\"After the team had financial troubles,the owner of the Nets decided totake the team to New Jersey,where the Nets played for thirty-five seasons.\"  \nG.Incorrect.There are no errors in the structure of sentence 3.The phrase \"including twoappearances in the NBA finals\"is a nonrestrictive phrase that provides further detail aboutthe team's \"sixteen playoff appearances.\"The phrase is set off by a comma because it is notessential to understanding the meaning of the sentence.  \nH.Incorrect.There are no errors in the structure of sentence 4.The clause \"where the teamnow plays under the name the Brooklyn Nets\"is a nonrestrictive clause that provides furtherdetail about the team after its move back to New York in 2012.The phrase is set off by acomma because it is not essential to understanding the meaning of the sentence.  \n3.  The question asks how the paragraph should be revised.  \nA.Incorrect.The revisions in this option introduce new errors.The word \"spent\"is correct in thepast tense because that is the tense used throughout the rest of the paragraph.Additionally,adding a comma after the word \"play\"would be incorrect because it would separate theprepositional phrase \"at the community theater\"from the rest of the sentence.  \nB.Incorrect.The revisions in this option introduce new errors.The word \"did\"is correct aswritten in the past tense because the past tense is used throughout the paragraph.Thereis no comma needed after the word \"projection\"because \"so\"is not functioning as aconjunction but rather as part of the conjunction phrase \"so that,\"which does not takea comma.  \nC.CORRECT.Changing the word \"studies\"from the present tense to the past tense \"studied\"isnecessary to match the ","cbCaiuvAAsz6Cixh","https://ap.wps.com/l/cbCaiuvAAsz6Cixh","pdf",7116185,"English","# REVISING/EDITING PART A\n## Questions 1-4","[{\"question\":\"How are paragraph revisions handled in terms of tense and punctuation?\",\"answer\":\"Edits must maintain consistent past-tense usage established in the paragraph and correct comma placement. 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