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It’s the hardest part of the application process  \n2. “The essay can be your ticket out of the faceless hordes and into First Choice University” -the essay, unlike other parts of your application, is in your complete control and an opportunity to show admissions officers who you are.  \nTwo things to do before writing college essays  \n1. Read other essays  \n2. Practice- “to write well, you have to write”  \n“A warning: There's no magic formula for writing the college essay. \"Writing,\" said E. B. White, \"is an act of faith, not a trick of grammar. \" It's not any kind of trick at all, in fact. Your writing is your way of seeing and of thinking.”  \n“How an essay really works: it shows you at your alive and thinking best, a person worth listening to—not just for the ten minutes it takes to read your application, but for the next four years.”  \nChapter 1: The Gray Area  \nOverview of College Admissions  \nThe Gray Area- “the murky netherworld peopled by those whose credentials are neither easily accepted nor easily denied” 99% of us are in “the gray area”  \nIf you're not from one of the built-in Lobby Groups in the process: recruited athletes, development prospects (people who can spare a few million in pocket change to build a new gymnasium), members of a federally designated minority group, or children of alumni. All these applicants have special advocates for them in close contact with the admissions committee. Everybody else is Just Folks.  \n“At best, life in the Gray Area means the admissions committee suspects you're someone who can do the work and even do it well at their school; at worst it means you are indistinguishable from the lump of other students with similar backgrounds and credentials who clog their application pool.”  \nYale Director of Admissions: “admits that if he flushed the entire admitted class and accepted instead a couple thousand rejects from that year, there would be no appreciable drop in ‘quality’”  \nSo just getting into the Gray Area at your first-choice school can be something of an accomplishment. The trick, of course, is getting out of the gray shadows of sameness and into the sunlight of acceptance. To do that, you have to become three-dimensional to the committee. The best way: write a good essay. 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