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The piece is appropriate for purpose and audience, making a reasonably persuasive case for the advantages of normality over fame. For Composition, the first bullet point in the mark band determines the mark given and so a middle band mark (5-8 for the longer Task 1) is awarded.  \nConsideration is then given to the other three bullet points to determine whether the piece merits 5 , 6, 7 or 8 marks. How well does the learner handle format, structure and paragraphing, as well as sentence and vocabulary range?  \nThe piece is appropriately and cohesively structured. A range of vocabulary and sentences is used and there is evidence of paragraphing. There are no specific formatting requirements for a web forum contribution. 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