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The materials provide sample scripts alongside examiner commentaries and indicative marks for Section A Reading questions 1 and 2, including notes on bullet-point coverage, textual references, subject terminology, and level outcomes. Intended to model effective answers for fiction analysis.","GCSE (9–1) English  \nLanguage 2.0  \nPaper 2: Fiction Texts (1EN2/02)  \nExemplar Scripts and Commentaries  \nSummer 2023 Series  \nIntroduction  \nSection A  \nQuestion 1  \nQuestion 2  \nQuestion 3  \nQuestion 4  \nQuestion 5  \nQuestion 6  \nSection B  \nQuestion 7  \nQuestion 8  \nPage  \n3  \n4–5  \n6–18 19–20 21–34 35–42 43–59  \n60–71 72–76  \n2  \nPearson Edexcel Level 1/Level 2 GCSE (9–1) in English Language 2.0 (1EN2)– Paper 2 2023 Exemplar – Issue 1 – September 2023 – Author and Approver: GQ Product – DCL1 © Pearson Education Limited 2023  \nIntroduction  \n• The purpose of this pack is to provide teachers and students with some examples of responses to GCSE English Language 2.0 Paper 2: Fiction Texts (1EN2/02 )  \n• The responses in this pack were taken from the Summer 2023 examination series. The question papers and mark schemes can be found of the Pearson website here.  \n• In this pack you will find a sample of responses, examiner commentaries and marks.  \n• If you have any enquiries regarding these materials or have any other questions about the course, please contact our English subject advisor on  \n[teachingenglish@pearson.com](teachingenglish@pearson.com)  \n3  \nPearson Edexcel Level 1/Level 2 GCSE (9–1) in English Language 2.0 (1EN2)– Paper 2 2023 Exemplar – Issue 1 – September 2023 – Author and Approver: GQ Product – DCL1 © Pearson Education Limited 2023  \nSection A: Reading  \nQuestion 1  \nScript 1  \nExaminer comment and mark:  \nThis response covers bullet point 8 from the mark scheme.  \n1 mark  \nScript 2  \nExaminer comment and mark:  \nThis response covers bullet point 6 from the mark scheme.  \n1 mark  \n4  \nPearson Edexcel Level 1/Level 2 GCSE (9–1) in English Language 2.0 (1EN2)– Paper 2 2023 Exemplar – Issue 1 – September 2023 – Author and Approver: GQ Product – DCL1 © Pearson Education Limited 2023  \nScript 3  \nExaminer comment and mark:  \nThis is incorrect as it is how they’re feeling – not related to the question and outside the lines.  \n0 marks  \n5  \nPearson Edexcel Level 1/Level 2 GCSE (9–1) in English Language 2.0 (1EN2)– Paper 2 2023 Exemplar – Issue 1 – September 2023 – Author and Approver: GQ Product – DCL1 © Pearson Education Limited 2023  \nQuestion 2  \nScript 1  \nExaminer comment and mark:  \nThere is some comment on the text but there is no textual reference or subject terminology.  \nLevel 1 – 1 mark  \n6  \nPearson Edexcel Level 1/Level 2 GCSE (9–1) in English Language 2.0 (1EN2)– Paper 2 2023 Exemplar – Issue 1 – September 2023 – Author and Approver: GQ Product – DCL1 © Pearson Education Limited 2023  \nScript 2  \nExaminer comment and mark:  \nThis response is limited on bullet point 1 of the mark scheme, but is selective in textual reference. 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