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The piece is appropriate for purpose and audience. For Composition, the first bullet point in the mark band determines the mark given and so a middle band mark (4-6 for the shorter Task 2) is awarded.  \nConsideration is then given to the other three bullet points to determine whether the piece merits 4, 5 or 6 marks. How well does the learner handle format, structure and paragraphing, as well as sentence and vocabulary range?  \nThe piece is appropriately and logically structured. Name and email have been given as requested. The piece uses a range of vocabulary and sentences and is appropriately paragraphed. The slightly confused inclusion of a salutation and valediction does not preclude a mark at the top of the middle band being awarded.  \nMark: 6  \nSpelling, Punctuation and Grammar  \nSpelling and punctuation are mainly correct, though there are grammatical errors, with words sometimes omitted and the wrong word form used, e.g.‘badly’ and‘to make’ instead of‘bad’ and‘making’. 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