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Write about this story. Write 20 or more words.  \n| Score | Criteria |\n| --- | --- |\n| 5 | • Response describes a progression of events which are explicitly connected to each other and\u003Cbr>• Response is based on all three pictures and\u003Cbr>• Minimal effort is required on the part of the reader to make sense of the response |\n| 4 | • Response describes a progression of events, some of which are explicitly connected to each other and\u003Cbr>• Response is based on all three pictures and\u003Cbr>• Some effort is required on the part of the reader to make sense of the response |\n| 3 | • Response describes a progression of events and response addresses at least one of the pictures OR\u003Cbr>• Response describes a progression of events and addresses all three pictures but imposes a significant strain on the reader, who may be required to read it more than once in order to make sense of it |\n| 2 | • Response includes at least one phrase that is clearly comprehensible |\n| 1 | • Response includes some English words discernible by the reader |\n| 0 | • Question unattempted or totally incomprehensible response |\n\nA2 Flyers Reading and Writing Tasks 73  \nSample answers  \nResponse A (beach images)  \n\n| in Jack is go to in is Jack is father go ball is and doll and shaker Haper stay words in is and china Jack is ball is backfast  Examiner comments 1 mark  The response includes some English words that the reader is able to understand.\u003Cbr>Response B (space images) |\n| --- |\n| Once upon a time in the space une astronaut come to the Equestria planet and one\u003Cbr> Examiner comments 2 marks \u003Cbr>The candidate has produced phrases that are comprehensible to the reader (once upon a time; une astronaut come to the Equestria planet) . However, without having demonstrated an ability to communicate a progression of events, he/she cannot score higher than 2 marks.\u003Cbr>Response C (beach images) |\n\nOne day a girly and a boy on the beath play ball. A white whale in the sea. girly and boy it very happy. But the ball throw in thesea, but the white whule  \n Examiner comments 3 marks   \nThis response successfully describes a progression of events and includes some phrases that are understandable to the reader, but it does not address all three pictures.  \nResponse D (beach images)  \n\n| One day Jack and Mary are play bell. Oh! no Jake take the bell into the sea. Great! a fish take the bell to the Mary!\u003Cbr> Examiner comments 3 marks \u003Cbr>This response successfully describes a progression of events, and it does address all three pictures, but it imposes a significant strain on the reader, who is likely to have to read the text more than once in order to make sense of it.\u003Cbr>Response E (beach images) |\n| --- |\n| There are children’s. They playing voleyball but the boy kick the ball to dolphin but friendly dolphin kick the ball back.\u003Cbr> Examiner comments 4 marks \u003Cbr>This response successfully describes a progression of events, and addresses all three of the pictures despite requiring some effort on the part of the reader.\u003Cbr>Response F (space images) |\n\nOne day there was an astronaut who visited moon he meet an alien. The astronaut was very hungry so he asked the alien for food the alien agreed and he had food with the alien and lived happily ever after.  \n Examiner comments 5 marks   \nThe candidate has described a progression of events and included all three pictures in their response. Minimal strain is imposed on the reader, who would be able to understand the text on first reading.  \n74","cbCaiu2QDnrIenjb","https://ap.wps.com/l/cbCaiu2QDnrIenjb","pdf",746822,"English","# Paper 2\n## Task instruction\n## Score criteria (0-5)\n## Sample responses and examiner commentaries","[{\"question\":\"What determines the score in A2 Flyers Part 7?\",\"answer\":\"Scores depend on whether the story shows a progression of events, how clearly events are connected, and whether the response is based on all three pictures. 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